A poem that I carry in my heart
A pain that holds me back to past
Will all this vanish with me
If today would be for me; the day last
A smile that I wanted to spread
A relation that I held through thread
Will all this cry for me
If today would be for me; the day last
A life that was crippled with hope
An eye from which tears eloped
Will all this die with me
If today would be for me; the day last
What If I lose to life twined in hope
Will it run down the slope or fight to cope
Will there be hope left behind my ashes
Will the dark night rise, before morning flashes
Or will it vanish like dew in winter
Surviving the night before sun splinters
Let my dead self do a favor to the rest
Unleashing the words from my treasure chest
Come fly with me, it’s time to leave your nest!
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A life that I longed for; being alive
I want my words to share that pie
Let they be remembered for time and long
Let rain sprinkle them from skies….
While sun dances to the rainbow song!!
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A very soulful poem indeed!!!
Loved it!
“Let they be remembered for time and long
Let rain sprinkle them from skies….
While sun dances to the rainbow song!!”
May God fulfil this wish of yours!
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That’s so sweet of you, bhavya! Thank you so much 🙂
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😊 My pleasure
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Beautifully penned 🖤
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I appreciate your feedback. Thank you so much, Hemendra! God Bless 🙂
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My pleasure.. welcome at Scattered Words..
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Such a poet you are! Written beautifully with a great choice of words. Well done Rohit!
“A life that was crippled with hope
An eye from which tears eloped”
Sabaash! ✌
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Hey, thanks a lot. I’m so happy to read your feedback. It’s means a lot to me as a writer. God Bless….
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I know how positive feedback can brighten up a whole gloomy day! Your writings deserved to be appreciated. Loved them!
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I’m glad you took your time out to read my work. It certainly made my day! Thank you so much !!
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Pleasures all mine Rohit! Have a great night!
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You too! Take care…
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You’re welcome 😏
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i loved the line fly with me and leave the rest ,and i am always looking forward to your posts , how much depressed i am i read your posts 🙂
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Let your depression unwind through words,
Gift your soul, a smile,
Don’t let your vision get blurred!
Don’t be afraid of this hazy sky
Pain is part; like rain is to sky
One day it will come down
And make your smile sail high!!
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Thank you
So beautiful really beautiful ☺
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this is incredible, nice job!
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That’s so sweet of you. Thanks a lot 🙂
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Awesome !!!!
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Ahh, thank you so very much 🙂 God bless….
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This truly beautiful, melodious
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Thank you so much, Ameena 🙂 God Bless!!
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Fabulous, Rohit!
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Thank you so much, Kunal 🙂 God Bless
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Blessings to you, too, buddy!
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This is very beautiful and well versed xx
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Thanks Hayley. Glad that you liked it. 🙂
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